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Collages: 21 x A3 Pages
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- Liked distorted ones, legs the wrong way etc. Dysfunctional [No 15]
- Liked 3D on top of magazines [No 10 -12]. Liked shadows (makeup sponge), reminded of Clone helmets (Star Wars) due to the angular non-human nature. Liked incline with hands.
- Liked [No 10] best due to angles, tampon doesn’t fit body? Alien, side view better.
- Tampon heavy as an object.
- Liked shape of pill packet.
- Thread separate powerful as an image? [No 19-21] Dissects image (Picasso?) [No 19]
- Focus on face [No 21]
- Humour of the proportions, floating, head in pain? Continues pose, effortless pose, contained.
- It’s about what I use in terms of the 3D objects.
- Some distort, some add, thread could be on a front cover of a magazine.
- Say that we obsess over looks (media not women).
- Problem to disrupt magazines, hard to subvert. The question of desire and allure?
- All have an ideal of what is attractive culturally.
- What would they be like as part of a bigger piece?
- Tampon doesn't work.
- Connotations are very heavy (pill packet).
- 3D doesn't work as well for some people due to the placement and choice of objects; the objects are too obvious and continue the form.
- Keeping the glossiness, not subverting/ attacking them.
- Need to decide if I'm sculpting a construct or simply a montage.
- What would happen if the images were placed in an environment? Paper feels temporary, try placing them in a picture painting?
- Play bigger with more materials, wilder! They need to be released.
- Put back in a magazine? Test them.
- Photocopy bits, blow up and create my own landscape, recognise as figures they all are.
- Sense of body is a projection. Play bodily e.g. if knee hurts make it bigger in the collage?
- Hannah Hoch (similar to her work, good!).
- Piece: Pile of pills a woman would take in a year.
- Dale Holmes: PhD graduate, how to construct an image: cut-paint-cut.
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